This intriguingly
titled book is Susan Andrews Grace's fourth publication. But there is
much more to this collection than its title. Grace writes in a kinetic
fashion that is firmly under her control. It is not this kinetic form
that first greets us though. Instead, we are provided with the promise
of high voltage about to be released:
They play until
nightfall ° small
children bat until they find
tribal love, greater than any god,
original sin incomprehensible
and yet there is the fall:
all the world before them-- (7)
which it finally
does in "Choosing a Team":
The tribe gathers
for weddings & anniversaries, ballgames
played hard
against
time
running
out
uncles
and nieces and great nephews and fathers and mothers lobbing
softballs
softly
(13)
The concept of
"tribal love," as exemplified in these passages, appears to be synonymous
with family gatherings, perhaps in some rural setting, where the teams
would be drawn and the positions allotted. At the same time, an ominous
feeling arises. Why the word "lobbing" where "throwing" would be expected,
"lobbing" the term one associates with a grenade rather than a softball?
This mood begins with the Prologue, where "tribal love" seems to merge
with eroticism and a coming-of-age--the biblical concept of original
sin somewhere out there on the playing field, where the fall in the
game is equivalent to the fall in the garden. Is this also the fall
into adulthood, "against time running out"? This raises the spectre
of death as an endgame--or is it one of the players on the field, something
always in play?
Sin continues into
"Outfielder":
Unlikely larch
amid poplar, aspen and brome grass--
Irish
grandparents buried in communion with dead Germans
a
spot reserved for open secrets: shame of ancestry
less
than original
sin
prepared
furrows (36)
The "prepared furrows,"
set out in bold print, has become a convention of the text by this time.
Another convention is revealed on the next page, 37: "catch hold first
source / their parents truth," where the symbol "" is more
accurately in the shape of a small iron cross. Other than their providing
an interesting visual, there appears to be no discernible pattern to
the placement of this and the raised circle mark. For the latter, which
presented itself in the first example, it could possibly have been that
this mark was intended to replace the comma. However, commas themselves
appear throughout the text diminishing this possibility.
"The Dugout" begins:
Liminal pleasures,
suppers ° refuge of sheltering bench
time out, hot sun, enamel dipper slippery cold
well water down the throat.
sun
in the eastern sky, the world all before them
Home is a baseball
construct. (53)
"Liminal" in this
instance refers to the passage from childhood into adulthood. If the
world is "all before them," then anywhere can be "home." Therefore,
the concept of a fixed location called "home" is only a "baseball construct."
Notice the predominance of 'l's and 'p's. The second line is an incredible
merging of assonance and consonance, creating a line that cries out
to be sung like those old English folk songs found only in the Appalachians.
"Copper Kettle," anyone?
Susan Andrews Grace
has portrayed life as a baseball game played within the confines of
the tribe. Slowly, the "tribe" has grown from a family reunion until
it encompasses the world--taking place in whichever community one finds
oneself at the moment. Along the way, we have encountered infancy and
innocence, lived in a liminal experience looking back at the games we
played, emerged into adulthood and then old age and always along the
way accompanied by that vague spectre called death. Grace has shown
a profound grasp of the provisions of poetry splaying them out upon
the pages of this book like so many ciphers, like so many landmines
that explode within our skulls as we trip upon them. When they do, we
are grateful for the experience.