In this collection
with its elliptical theme suggested by the title, Elizabeth Bachinsky
writes about her family, her Ukrainian roots, the Chernobyl nuclear
explosion, an ancestor who worked in a labour camp in Banff and, within
that extended circle of experience, about herself or projections of
herself. While black and white prints, prayers set in italics, incantations
and spells introduce the three numbered sections, the poems in this
slender volume are worth savouring for their almost iconic images and
for the speaker's deceptively off-hand observations that shift their
reference sometimes more than once in a poem. Here is a spiritual and
erotic poetry from a female perspective that elicits and completes in
the reader's mind some of the poet's own insights while a sense of discovery
inheres in the often ironic displacements.
In the poem "God
of Mechanical Accidents," "for the children and workers of the Children
Cancer Ward of Minsk, Belarus," the poet invokes an ironic idolatry
of the child disfigured by cancer:
Make a Church
of the Child, how she suffers.
She is two-headed, tow-headed, mythic, cries
for milk with one mouth, succour with the other. (11)
While the representation
of the child in the guise of a primitive god with two mouths follows
the natural extension of the metaphor of the "Church of the Child,"
that "the Child" "cries for milk" with one mouth and "succour" with
the other brings the reader back to the disturbing reality of the living
situation. With their dual address of the sinister and the naive, these
verses flow with a periodic rhythm whose broken music jars the reader
with each new realization. Accordingly, a shift to "boxcars stuffed
with grain" and "Vancouver smog" in the last stanza aligns the Chernobyl
theme with a familiar environmental one in which technology may be seen
to endanger the natural landscape of which children form a part.
In "Letter to
My Sister," the speaker converses with her sister about their shared
childhood memories that reflect an uncanny proximity to death. We hear
them reminisce about watching their cousin Jenny practise with the Poltava
dancers in the Labour Temple in Regina, the day after their grandmother's
ashes were laid beside her grandfather's, about their mother's life-threatening
low blood sugar on this memorable occasion. Suggestive of her initiation
into love and life, Jenny is reluctant to dance in the presence of the
young male dancers: "Man, those boys could jump." But once started,
she "could/ spin and spin and spin and spin" (13).
Just as their grandmother's
grave is marked with a headstone in the graveyard across town, so the
sisters' discovery of their mother's red Ukrainian dancing boots provides
reassurance (if not evidence) of their mother's having met and danced
with or courted her father:
. . . I mean,
I know we know the story
of how our parents met, but didn't you think
it felt like proof, knowing those boots were there? (13)
A black and white
print of the dancing boot introduces the section, becoming something
of an icon in the reader's mind.
Reminiscent of
Gwendolyn MacEwen's "Dark Pines Under Water," Bachinsky's poem "God
of Missed Connections" employs changing metaphors to reveal her conception
of the nature of the mind and unconscious. Unlike MacEwen's poem, which
creates an implicit metaphor in the landscape it describes, Bachinsky
likens the mind to a alluvial plain with layers of geological markings,
only to depart from this ingenious concept and find another analogy
in "split obsidium," whose variant smoothness becomes an image for the
mind looking back at itself. This poem should make its way into anthologies,
so striking are the transitions and layers of suggestion. (56)
In "Goddess of
Chance Encounters," Bachinksy builds on this series based on invented
secular or household gods. Here the elegant couplets flow with punctuated
smoothness, at every turn uncovering some new way of looking at the
subject matter. The focus of the poem shifts from a female speaker who
has discovered a human jawbone to "any jogger" who may make such a discovery
"in the chop," to the reported case of a " woman who left her husband"
"for a man she met in passing at a party." In this way, we are led through
the turns in the poem to an ironic confusion of the female speaker with
the woman in the anecdote and, by extension, with every-woman.
. . . Poor thing.
She can't stop
thinking of the teeth. Whose they were,
whose they weren't.
She sees herself, of course,
but also someone else. Someone she doesn't know at all. (59)
Equally expert
in its management of ironic shifts is "God of Panic." From the self-conscious,
adolescent female speaker who imagines that "the boys" are all watching
her, to the revealing digression that the speaker's father has just
left her mother for "an even lonelier telemarketer," to the imagined
rape scene, the reader is left gasping at the accumulating surreal shifts
in setting with their reeling implications:
. . . Twenty
cocks shuttling under the white spot so white it was like
blinding white light as twenty tongues and two hundred
fingers found their pleasure at once she woke beneath the goal
posts. She could feel the close-lipped lawn was cool
beneath her cheek. (63)
With each new created
context, the psychological circumstances of the subject are revealed
in a new light, adding black comedy to that projected pandemonium.
One of my favourite
poems is "Pig Iron," in which implied metaphors rise in the molten lava
of the words so unexpectedly that it is like finding Waldo. Rather like
the junk heap of a landfill that the poem describes, a "dumbbell" or
"an engine block" may be picked out.
. . . Oh well,
for a time you've been out-of-date, corporeal
in the basements of the universities--
forgotten, forgotten, you wait for one big shake
to bring you to a head. (73)
Always fresh, frequently
erotic and sometimes alarming, Bachinsky's ironic shifts and careful
displacements locate her poetry in a postmodern tradition without ever
losing sight of the female speaker with her Ukrainian roots and experience
in a Regina or Vancouver setting. This slender collection provides a
read by turns funny, exhilarating, macabre, tongue-in-cheek and dolorous.