Elizabeth Bachinsky
is the author of three books of poetry, Curio (BookThug 2005),
Home of Sudden Service (Nightwood Editions, 2006), nominated
for the Governor General's Award, and God of Missed Connections
(Nightwood Editions, 2009). She lives in Vancouver, a good place for
any poet of an experimental bent.
Curio is,
well, a curious book. It is made up of a number of disparate sections.
One of the first is titled "From the Secret Diaries of Antonin Artaud,"
in which Bachinsky attempts to write in the voice of Artaud. Many of
the entries blur the distinction between prose and poetry, making the
reader wonder where the concept of prose poetry has taken us. Is this
a flashback to Pound's famous war cry calling for (paraphrased) 'poetry
as good as prose.' An excellent example both of Bachinsky's response
to this summons as well as of her wit is the letter found at p. 27 which
begins:
Dear Sir,
It is with great trepidation that I write to
you. But, seeing as you have been unable to afford me a reply regarding
the manuscript I sent to you many months ago, I feel it is my duty to
inform you of a grave error in my judgment. It has been my misfortune
to have sent you a manuscript which, I feel, is horribly unfit for publication
in P_________; I would therefore like to withdraw my submission forthwith.
The letter continues
in the same self-deprecating, ironic manner.
The next section,
Spy Cam: Surveillance Series, recalls some of Erin Moure's or Susan
Howe's work. Consider "Supermarket" on p. 34, which begins:
"Enough pussy. Wash your hands. It is time to go out. . ." The page
ends with the line "Her mouth is cruel, but you know bruises fade and
this moment, this moment, when you know you are, should stretch on forever."
The facing page, p. 35, mirrors the previous one, the first line on
that page being "This moment when you know you are should stretch on
forever." and ends "Enough pussy. Wash your hands. It is time to go
out into the city." Each poem in this section is the same, with the
facing page reflecting the first, but with subtle differences, which
bring the poem into the realm of critical theory.
One of the poems
in an unreplicable section title is "Lead the Wants." The entire poem
is an anagram of a famous poem by a famous poet. What does the fearless
reader make of this: "Brilliant duel them corset her penis. / A million
toxic duds dangle. Get a / Night-rise or day-rites --merge, mend."(57)
Perhaps these lines on p. 63 will give you a clue as to what is going
on and by whom:
Witt witt witt
Guj guj guj guj guj guj
Record duos fly
Re: e, tu
Each of the lines
is supposed to match the rhythm and sound of that of the poem from which
it was derived. Amazingly, even without the help of K. Silem Mohammed's
Afterword, added in this revised edition, in which he sets out to explicate
"Lead the Wants," the reader begins to unravel the concept of who and
what through the haze of these distortions coming to a perhaps passive
recognition that what is at play is T.S. Eliot's "The Waste Land."
Elizabeth Bachinsky
is as much a formalist, as much an intellectual poet, as is Christian
Bšk. Paraphrasing the 60s anthem first heard at a Black Panthers rally:
"Write on, Elizabeth!"